The front cover is very organised, and structured well. The contents page has the features and conventions positioned properly and they have been used well. The dps has a lot of text and journalism to improve it i would use better images as the background is grey and isn't contrasting well.
I like the layout of the magazine it looks very professional , the space is used very effectively also the colour scheme is simple. However im not a big fan of the font choice but that may just be my preference
Really like the layout of your contents page and double page spread but on the double page spread, for your pull quote, you could have written it in white instead of in a white box. Also I like your colour scheme.
errr...merrr...gerd.... the magazine is looking sexY!!! it is well structured and the text is well noticed and catchy especially the mast head 'REBEL'. The way you reversed the E is very effective. You kept the colour scheme going through out the magazine which is good plus the contents and the DPS is well layed out.
your magazine is very good. the images look professional and the colours used are attractive. the layout is simple and good. I think your could improve on the background of your text in the DPS because the writing doesn't look clear.
I really like your magazine, particularly I like your content page and double page spread because they both look professional. The images that you use is effective and connects to the genre of your magazine. Well done Zak :)))
JHEEEZ front page is looking mad the fonts used are appropriate for the genre however I would advise if you can make the words a bit clearer the contents page is well laid out and the double page spread is a bit plain but yet attractive in some areas
The front cover looks good and I can clearly tell that the target audience is for males, the contents page is a bit squashed but overall ok, I can't really read the dps but good effort.
Your magazine collectively is really nice and well structured. Your use of colour is very nice and attractive to the audience and the images used are professional. I also think that you have detailed cover lines on your front cover which are appealing and will intrigue the audience.
The front cover is very organised, and structured well. The contents page has the features and conventions positioned properly and they have been used well. The dps has a lot of text and journalism to improve it i would use better images as the background is grey and isn't contrasting well.
ReplyDeleteI like the layout of the magazine it looks very professional , the space is used very effectively also the colour scheme is simple. However im not a big fan of the font choice but that may just be my preference
ReplyDeleteawww thanks xx =) I like your cover star too
DeleteReally like the layout of your contents page and double page spread but on the double page spread, for your pull quote, you could have written it in white instead of in a white box. Also I like your colour scheme.
ReplyDeleteerrr...merrr...gerd.... the magazine is looking sexY!!! it is well structured and the text is well noticed and catchy especially the mast head 'REBEL'. The way you reversed the E is very effective. You kept the colour scheme going through out the magazine which is good plus the contents and the DPS is well layed out.
ReplyDeleteyour magazine is very good. the images look professional and the colours used are attractive. the layout is simple and good. I think your could improve on the background of your text in the DPS because the writing doesn't look clear.
ReplyDeleteI really like your magazine, particularly I like your content page and double page spread because they both look professional. The images that you use is effective and connects to the genre of your magazine. Well done Zak :)))
ReplyDeleteJHEEEZ front page is looking mad the fonts used are appropriate for the genre however I would advise if you can make the words a bit clearer
ReplyDeletethe contents page is well laid out
and the double page spread is a bit plain but yet attractive in some areas
The front cover looks good and I can clearly tell that the target audience is for males, the contents page is a bit squashed but overall ok, I can't really read the dps but good effort.
ReplyDeleteYour magazine collectively is really nice and well structured. Your use of colour is very nice and attractive to the audience and the images used are professional. I also think that you have detailed cover lines on your front cover which are appealing and will intrigue the audience.
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